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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
From:       Thomas Pfeiffer <thomas.pfeiffer () kde ! org>
Date:       2016-03-19 21:07:24
Message-ID: 2207002.FrAzzyWUUp () lenovo
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On Samstag, 19. März 2016 21:52:09 CET Michael Brade wrote:
> Am 19.03.2016 um 21:30 schrieb Alexander Neundorf:
> > On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote:
> > ...
> > 
> >> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis:
> >> 
> >> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys
> >> freedom and privacy."
> > 
> > How about one more tweak ?
> > 
> > "A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom
> > and privacy."

One can "manage" something without having full control over it, so I'd like us 
to keep the control part in there.

> Well, that's two tweaks (SCNR ;)
> 
> But I like the idea, so how about really just one tweak: getting rid of
> the double "and":
> 
> 
> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life, enjoying
> freedom and privacy."

Makes it even better!
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