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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
From:       Valorie Zimmerman <valorie.zimmerman () gmail ! com>
Date:       2016-03-21 5:38:31
Message-ID: CACpu02507bdw8O+7Rb1-E=J8tOO5QdnC72w44kPXBTz2+81i7w () mail ! gmail ! com
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On Sat, Mar 19, 2016 at 2:07 PM, Thomas Pfeiffer
<thomas.pfeiffer@kde.org> wrote:
> On Samstag, 19. März 2016 21:52:09 CET Michael Brade wrote:
>> Am 19.03.2016 um 21:30 schrieb Alexander Neundorf:
>> > On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote:
>> > ...
>> >
>> >> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis:
>> >>
>> >> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys
>> >> freedom and privacy."
>> >
>> > How about one more tweak ?
>> >
>> > "A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom
>> > and privacy."
>
> One can "manage" something without having full control over it, so I'd like us
> to keep the control part in there.
>
>> Well, that's two tweaks (SCNR ;)
>>
>> But I like the idea, so how about really just one tweak: getting rid of
>> the double "and":
>>
>>
>> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life, enjoying
>> freedom and privacy."
>
> Makes it even better!

+1!
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