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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
From:       Michael Brade <brade () kde ! org>
Date:       2016-03-19 20:52:09
Message-ID: 56EDBBF9.4010205 () kde ! org
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Am 19.03.2016 um 21:30 schrieb Alexander Neundorf:
> On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote:
> ...
>> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis:
>>
>> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys
>> freedom and privacy."
> 
> How about one more tweak ?
> 
> "A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom and 
> privacy."

Well, that's two tweaks (SCNR ;)

But I like the idea, so how about really just one tweak: getting rid of
the double "and":


"A world in which everyone has control over their digital life, enjoying
freedom and privacy."


Reason: I don't want to just manage it, I want full control.

cheers, Michael

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