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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
From:       Alexander Neundorf <neundorf () kde ! org>
Date:       2016-03-19 20:30:04
Message-ID: 2968893.BYbZXqMlSL () tuxedo ! neundorf ! net
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 22:53:03 David Jarvie wrote:
...
> This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis:
> 
> "A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys
> freedom and privacy."

How about one more tweak ?

"A world in which everyone can manage their digital life enjoying freedom and 
privacy."

(IMO "have control" and "privacy" are quite close in what they imply, and 
"manage" refers a bit more to the actual activities, than "just" control over 
them.)

Alex

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