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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] Article about Baloo
From:       Stuart Jarvis <jarvis () kde ! org>
Date:       2014-02-21 12:14:01
Message-ID: 1535192.Go8uz5qo74 () pecksniff ! lan
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On Friday 21 February 2014 12:34:46 Jos Poortvliet wrote:
> On Friday 21 February 2014 11:47:05 Aaron J. Seigo wrote:
> > On Friday, February 21, 2014 09:22:52 Stuart Jarvis wrote:
> > > "developed in a European Union funded research project"
> > > would become
> > > "developed in a European Union funded research project (NEPOMUK)".
> > 
> > imo not only should Nepomuk be mentioned in this fasion for the reasons
> > Stuart mentions, but the word "external" should be dropped from the
> > sentence. External to what? (We know, will the reader? Doubtful..) Does it
> > matter to the story? No.
> > 
> > Introducing an unclear distinction is a distraction, and as it is
> > unnecessary should be removed.
> > 
> > I've also cleared up some grammar issues in the text (which don't affect
> > meaning)
> 
> We hacked on it together and besides having good fun due to our various
> locations and lag, I think we improved the text. As far as I am concerned I
> feel it is good to go. Nepomuk is now mentioned but I think it is done in
> the right way and context: it was the EU project. We suggest 'our' Semantic
> Search is separate.
> 
> All good with it this way?

It looks good to me :-)

Stu


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