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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    [kde-promo] Re: KDE 4.6 LiveDVD
From:       Javier Llorente <javier () opensuse ! org>
Date:       2011-03-23 22:32:38
Message-ID: 201103232332.41627.javier () opensuse ! org
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El Miércoles, 23 de Marzo de 2011 21:31:37 Will Stephenson escribió:
> Here is Siddarth's work in progress on the sleeve.  The text is by Stuart.
> 
> http://img821.imageshack.us/i/coveryi.png/
> 
> Any feedback/suggestions?

First of all, thanks for your work, Siddarths and Stuart. Now onto the 
feedback & suggestions :)


Perhaps a screenshot could be added to the back of the DVD sleeve to show how 
beautiful KDE is? ;-)

The text on the back is a bit hard to read. A semi-transparent rectangle below 
the text could help. I suggest changing the font colour as well. 

I would make the KDE logo a bit smaller in the front cover.

Put KDE 4.6.1 or KDE 4 instead of KDE 4.6.

I would add some KDE applications' icons to the top right of the back (ie: 
Konqueror, Amarok, Kontact, K3b). You could also play with their sizes (take a 
look at the first page of the KDE booklet 
http://community.kde.org/index.php?title=File:Kde_booklet_ver8.pdf )

Regarding the text, I think it should read "[...] KDE, a free software 
community" (a community, not the community). 
I would replace "What's on the DVD?" with a slogan like "Be Free." I would 
remove "This DVD contains [...]" and would add "The KDE software is developed 
by a worldwide free software community. You can also join us! Learn more about 
KDE at <br><big>www.kde.org</big>" and I would put it after "The KDE software 
includes..." paragraph.

I would make "The DVD can either be run on [...]" smaller, different from the 
other paragraph to differentiate "what KDE is" from "what you can do with this 
DVD."


Cheers,
-- 
Javier Llorente

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