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Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] KDE SC 4.3.4 dot story -- quick review?
From:       Inge Wallin <inge () lysator ! liu ! se>
Date:       2009-12-01 12:47:29
Message-ID: 200912011347.29616.inge () lysator ! liu ! se
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On Tuesday 01 December 2009 13:28:16 Stuart Jarvis wrote:
> On Tuesday 01 December 2009 12:06:30 Sebastian Kügler wrote:
> > http://dot.kde.org/2009/12/01/kde-sc-434-released-codename-cold
> > 
> > I'd like this to go out anytime now, the text is short but it would
> > nevertheless be good if someone could do a sanity check. Shouldn't take
> > more than 5 minutes. :)
> 
> I'd suggest:
> 
> Plasma desktop -> Plasma Desktop (or KDE workspaces if you want to include
> Plasma Netbook, since talking there about 4.4)
> 
> "KDE has now entered the stabilization period for 4.4" is a little
> ambiguous - it's easy to read that as KDE, the software. So maybe "the KDE
> team has now entered..."

Sell what you have.  Don't pimp KDE 4.4 in an announcement for 4.3.4.


> (I didn't make any edits to the article as there are multiple options)
> 
> Couple of observations on the actual release announcement, not sure if they
> can/should be changed
> 
> It includes a link to itself ("this month's edition of KDE SC")
> It uses terms like KDE 4.3 and KDE 4.3.4 in several places - should all of
> these switch to KDE SC now or do we save that until 4.4?
> 
> Cheers,
> Stu
> 
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