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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] About KDE dialog text
From:       "Gary L. Greene, Jr." <greeneg () tolharadys ! net>
Date:       2009-11-12 20:46:55
Message-ID: 200911121246.55866.greeneg () tolharadys ! net
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On Thursday 12 November 2009 12:43:44 am Aaron J. Seigo wrote:
> On November 10, 2009, Thomas Thym wrote:
> > Very nice!
> > 
> > Just two minor comments.
> > 
> > First paragraph: I would mention KDE also with SD.
> > 
> > "... KDE Development Platform and KDE Software Distribution" instead of
> > "... KDE Development Platform and Software Distribution".
> 
> a bit pedantic, but also clearer. done.
> 
> > Second paragraph: The word "enterprise" was a little bit strange for me.
> > I associated it with "corporate / commercial enterprise".
> 
> the professional leaning is intentional; an 'enterprise' is "a purposeful
> or industrious undertaking" ... or a space ship with a vulcan and a hot
> headed captain who does well with the alien life forms. ;)
> 
> anyways ... communicating :)
> 

Small nitpick: enterprise in US is enterprize. The S is a Z in most cases in 
the US.

-- 
Gary L. Greene, Jr.
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