From kde-promo  Thu Nov 12 20:46:55 2009
From: "Gary L. Greene, Jr." <greeneg () tolharadys ! net>
Date: Thu, 12 Nov 2009 20:46:55 +0000
To: kde-promo
Subject: Re: [kde-promo] About KDE dialog text
Message-Id: <200911121246.55866.greeneg () tolharadys ! net>
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On Thursday 12 November 2009 12:43:44 am Aaron J. Seigo wrote:
> On November 10, 2009, Thomas Thym wrote:
> > Very nice!
> >
> > Just two minor comments.
> >
> > First paragraph: I would mention KDE also with SD.
> >
> > "... KDE Development Platform and KDE Software Distribution" instead of
> > "... KDE Development Platform and Software Distribution".
> 
> a bit pedantic, but also clearer. done.
> 
> > Second paragraph: The word "enterprise" was a little bit strange for me.
> > I associated it with "corporate / commercial enterprise".
> 
> the professional leaning is intentional; an 'enterprise' is "a purposeful
>  or industrious undertaking" ... or a space ship with a vulcan and a hot
>  headed captain who does well with the alien life forms. ;)
> 
> anyways ... communicating :)
> 

Small nitpick: enterprise in US is enterprize. The S is a Z in most cases in 
the US.

-- 
Gary L. Greene, Jr.
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