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Subject: Re: [kde-promo] Beta 2 announcement
From: "Jos Poortvliet" <jos () mijnkamer ! nl>
Date: 2007-09-04 13:25:04
Message-ID: 5c77e14b0709040625q6733d354r48898c02b8db4ffa () mail ! gmail ! com
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On 9/4/07, Jos Poortvliet <jos@mijnkamer.nl> wrote:
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> On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > >
> > > Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests
> > > some minor changes for the dot announce!
> > > I would change the 2nd, 3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph 2 to;
> > >
> > > "Now it is time to start polishing these features, <to> write and
> > > translate documentation and <to> improve the artwork and usability.
> > > Bigger changes in the sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< .
> > > > KDE 4.0 is feature-frozen now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet
> > > some KDE components like Plasma are exempt from this freeze, so in
> > > some areas KDE will still see major improvements."
> > > (In your 2nd sentence the verbs have been restored, I think your 3rd
> > > sentence should actually be 2. In your 4th, the extraneous apostrophe
> > > and comma are removed from 'areas'.)
> > > IANAECP (I am not an English Comp Professor)
> > >
> > > I'll move on to the info page and see if I have further suggestions!
> > > Thanks for the good work.
> > >
> > Oops! 1st sentence of para 2 should read "Since the libraries WERE
> > frozen..."
> > And these recommendations should apply to the beginning of the info
> > article so I will not repeat...
>
>
> Thank you. All done.
>
Thank you to all. I will finish this tonight, try to make some screenshots &
such, and send the announcement and other stuff to sebas and danny and
riddel and see who is first in getting it online :D
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On 9/4/07, <b class="gmail_sendername">Jos Poortvliet</b> <<a \
href="mailto:jos@mijnkamer.nl">jos@mijnkamer.nl</a>> wrote:<div><span \
class="gmail_quote"></span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, \
204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;"> <span class="q">On 9/3/07, <b \
class="gmail_sendername">Steve Tose</b> <<a href="mailto:stevetose@gmail.com" target="_blank" \
onclick="return top.js.OpenExtLink(window,event,this)">stevetose@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</span> \
<div><span class="gmail_quote"> </span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid \
rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;"><span class="q"> On 9/3/07, Steve Tose \
<<a href="mailto:stevetose@gmail.com" target="_blank" onclick="return \
top.js.OpenExtLink(window,event,this)">stevetose@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>> ><br></span><span \
class="q">> Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests <br>> some \
minor changes for the dot announce! <br>> I would change the 2nd, 3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph \
2 to;<br>><br>> "Now it is time to start polishing these features, <to> write \
and<br>> translate documentation and <to> improve the artwork and usability. <br>> Bigger \
changes in the sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< .<br>> > KDE 4.0 is feature-frozen \
now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet<br>> some KDE components like Plasma are exempt from this \
freeze, so in <br>> some areas KDE will still see major improvements."<br>> (In your 2nd \
sentence the verbs have been restored, I think your 3rd<br>> sentence should actually be 2. In your \
4th, the extraneous apostrophe<br>
> and comma are removed from 'areas'.)<br>> IANAECP (I am not an English Comp \
Professor)<br>><br>> I'll move on to the info page and see if I have further \
suggestions!<br>> Thanks for the good work. <br>><br>Oops! 1st sentence of para 2 should read \
"Since the libraries WERE frozen..."<br>And these recommendations should apply to the beginning \
of the info<br>article so I will not repeat...</span></blockquote> <div>
<br>Thank you. All done.<br></div><span class="q"></span></div></blockquote></div><br>Thank you to all. I \
will finish this tonight, try to make some screenshots & such, and send the announcement and other \
stuff to sebas and danny and riddel and see who is first in getting it online :D <br>
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