From kde-promo Tue Sep 04 13:25:04 2007 From: "Jos Poortvliet" Date: Tue, 04 Sep 2007 13:25:04 +0000 To: kde-promo Subject: Re: [kde-promo] Beta 2 announcement Message-Id: <5c77e14b0709040625q6733d354r48898c02b8db4ffa () mail ! gmail ! com> X-MARC-Message: https://marc.info/?l=kde-promo&m=118891234308849 MIME-Version: 1 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="--===============1398234135==" --===============1398234135== Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_Part_19907_15532137.1188912304351" ------=_Part_19907_15532137.1188912304351 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline On 9/4/07, Jos Poortvliet wrote: > > On 9/3/07, Steve Tose wrote: > > > > On 9/3/07, Steve Tose wrote: > > > > > > > Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests > > > some minor changes for the dot announce! > > > I would change the 2nd, 3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph 2 to; > > > > > > "Now it is time to start polishing these features, write and > > > translate documentation and improve the artwork and usability. > > > Bigger changes in the sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< . > > > > KDE 4.0 is feature-frozen now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet > > > some KDE components like Plasma are exempt from this freeze, so in > > > some areas KDE will still see major improvements." > > > (In your 2nd sentence the verbs have been restored, I think your 3rd > > > sentence should actually be 2. In your 4th, the extraneous apostrophe > > > and comma are removed from 'areas'.) > > > IANAECP (I am not an English Comp Professor) > > > > > > I'll move on to the info page and see if I have further suggestions! > > > Thanks for the good work. > > > > > Oops! 1st sentence of para 2 should read "Since the libraries WERE > > frozen..." > > And these recommendations should apply to the beginning of the info > > article so I will not repeat... > > > Thank you. All done. > Thank you to all. I will finish this tonight, try to make some screenshots & such, and send the announcement and other stuff to sebas and danny and riddel and see who is first in getting it online :D ------=_Part_19907_15532137.1188912304351 Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline On 9/4/07, Jos Poortvliet <jos@mijnkamer.nl> wrote:
On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests
> some minor changes for the dot announce!
> I would change the 2nd, 3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph 2 to;
>
> "Now it is time to start polishing these features, <to> write and
> translate documentation and <to> improve the artwork and usability.
> Bigger changes in the sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< .
> > KDE 4.0 is feature-frozen now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet
> some KDE components like Plasma are exempt from this freeze, so in
> some areas KDE will still see major improvements."
> (In your 2nd sentence the verbs have been restored, I think your 3rd
> sentence should actually be 2. In your 4th, the extraneous apostrophe
> and comma are removed from 'areas'.)
> IANAECP (I am not an English Comp Professor)
>
> I'll move on to the info page and see if I have further suggestions!
> Thanks for the good work.
>
Oops! 1st sentence of para 2 should read "Since the libraries WERE frozen..."
And these recommendations should apply to the beginning of the info
article so I will not repeat...

Thank you. All done.

Thank you to all. I will finish this tonight, try to make some screenshots & such, and send the announcement and other stuff to sebas and danny and riddel and see who is first in getting it online :D
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