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Subject: Re: [kde-promo] Beta 2 announcement
From: "Jos Poortvliet" <jos () mijnkamer ! nl>
Date: 2007-09-04 13:23:32
Message-ID: 5c77e14b0709040623p20eb3633qd81b750d40db4434 () mail ! gmail ! com
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On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
> > >
> > Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests
> > some minor changes for the dot announce!
> > I would change the 2nd, 3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph 2 to;
> >
> > "Now it is time to start polishing these features, <to> write and
> > translate documentation and <to> improve the artwork and usability.
> > Bigger changes in the sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< .
> > > KDE 4.0 is feature-frozen now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet
> > some KDE components like Plasma are exempt from this freeze, so in
> > some areas KDE will still see major improvements."
> > (In your 2nd sentence the verbs have been restored, I think your 3rd
> > sentence should actually be 2. In your 4th, the extraneous apostrophe
> > and comma are removed from 'areas'.)
> > IANAECP (I am not an English Comp Professor)
> >
> > I'll move on to the info page and see if I have further suggestions!
> > Thanks for the good work.
> >
> Oops! 1st sentence of para 2 should read "Since the libraries WERE
> frozen..."
> And these recommendations should apply to the beginning of the info
> article so I will not repeat...
Thank you. All done.
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On 9/3/07, <b class="gmail_sendername">Steve Tose</b> <<a \
href="mailto:stevetose@gmail.com" target="_blank" onclick="return \
top.js.OpenExtLink(window,event,this)">stevetose@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<div><span \
class="gmail_quote"> </span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px \
solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;"> On 9/3/07, \
Steve Tose <<a href="mailto:stevetose@gmail.com" target="_blank" onclick="return \
top.js.OpenExtLink(window,event,this)">stevetose@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>> \
><br>> Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests \
<br>> some minor changes for the dot announce! <br>> I would change the 2nd, \
3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph 2 to;<br>><br>> "Now it is time to \
start polishing these features, <to> write and<br>> translate documentation \
and <to> improve the artwork and usability. <br>> Bigger changes in the \
sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< .<br>> > KDE 4.0 is \
feature-frozen now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet<br>> some KDE components \
like Plasma are exempt from this freeze, so in <br>> some areas KDE will still see \
major improvements."<br>> (In your 2nd sentence the verbs have been restored, \
I think your 3rd<br>> sentence should actually be 2. In your 4th, the extraneous \
apostrophe<br>
> and comma are removed from 'areas'.)<br>> IANAECP (I am not an \
English Comp Professor)<br>><br>> I'll move on to the info page and see if \
I have further suggestions!<br>> Thanks for the good work. <br>><br>Oops! 1st \
sentence of para 2 should read "Since the libraries WERE frozen..."<br>And \
these recommendations should apply to the beginning of the info<br>article so I will \
not repeat...</blockquote><div>
<br>Thank you. All done.<br></div><br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" \
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