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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] Beta 2 announcement
From:       "Steve Tose" <stevetose () gmail ! com>
Date:       2007-09-04 2:35:43
Message-ID: 6503d2510709031935p3a288afclc327a29c48620d67 () mail ! gmail ! com
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On 9/3/07, Wade Olson <wade@corefunction.com> wrote:
> On 9/3/07, Steve Tose <stevetose@gmail.com> wrote:
> > On 9/2/07, Jos Poortvliet <jos@mijnkamer.nl> wrote:
> > Two minutes or so didn't reveal anything, but three minutes suggests
> > some minor changes for the dot announce!
> > I would change the 2nd, 3rd & 4th sentences of paragraph 2 to;
> > 
> > "Now it is time to start polishing these features, <to> write and
> > translate documentation and <to> improve the artwork and usability.
> > Bigger changes in the sourcecode will now have to wait for KDE 4.1< .
> > > KDE 4.0 is feature-frozen now and going into bugfixing mode. Yet
> > some KDE components like Plasma are exempt from this freeze, so in
> > some areas KDE will still see major improvements."
> > (In your 2nd sentence the verbs have been restored, I think your 3rd
> > sentence should actually be 2. In your 4th, the extraneous apostrophe
> > and comma are removed from 'areas'.)
> 
> Yes, we need to keep the verb use consistent in this area (wasn't in
> the original).
> 
> > IANAECP (I am not an English Comp Professor)
> 
> BYCB (But you could be)
Hmm, my most memorable college grade was failing English Comp I in a
Community College, but that's another story...thanks though.

Steve

> 
> > 
> > I'll move on to the info page and see if I have further suggestions!
> > Thanks for the good work.
> > 
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