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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] Top 6 KDE Programs You've Probably Never Heard Of
From:       Adriaan de Groot <groot () kde ! org>
Date:       2006-12-24 14:44:56
Message-ID: 200612241544.56714.groot () kde ! org
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On Saturday 23 December 2006 21:34, Dark Apostrophe wrote:
> Here's a rough draft of an article I've written. Top 6 KDE apps you've
> probably never heard of, as the message title says. I attached it as an
> OASIS OpenDocument file. Tell me what you think. :)


"needless to say" -> is needless, so don't say it.
"like its name indicates" -> does it really? for nerds, maybe. "suggests" 
might be better.
Kima: might mention it's linux only (if it is).

Other than that, looks like a pretty good first draft.

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