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List:       kde-devel
Subject:    Re: screenshots page
From:       Mike Pilone <mpilone () slac ! com>
Date:       1999-03-17 12:40:13
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I read it over and this is what I got:

Page 3, Pic 1: "...showing two windows of the user..." This makes it
ssound like there are two windows of each. I would say,
	"...showing two windows, the user..."

Well, thats it! I wish I could write that good (being a native speaker and
all!). Great work on the page by the way. I used to send people who asked
for screenshots to kde.themes.org, now I can send them to the kde home!

-mike

On Wed, 17 Mar 1999, Matthias Elter wrote:

> 
> Can some native English speaker please look through the updated KDE screenshots
> pages in case I got some spelling or gramar mistakes in the description texts?
> 
> Thanks,
> Matthias
> 
>  --
> Best regards,
> Matthias Elter <me@kde.org>
> 

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