From kde-promo Fri Feb 21 17:16:33 2014 From: Carl Symons Date: Fri, 21 Feb 2014 17:16:33 +0000 To: kde-promo Subject: Re: [kde-promo] Article about Baloo Message-Id: <530789F1.2020502 () gmail ! com> X-MARC-Message: https://marc.info/?l=kde-promo&m=139301375124394 On 02/21/2014 03:34 AM, Jos Poortvliet wrote: > On Friday 21 February 2014 11:47:05 Aaron J. Seigo wrote: >> On Friday, February 21, 2014 09:22:52 Stuart Jarvis wrote: >>> "developed in a European Union funded research project" >>> would become >>> "developed in a European Union funded research project (NEPOMUK)". >> >> imo not only should Nepomuk be mentioned in this fasion for the reasons >> Stuart mentions, but the word =93external=94 should be dropped from the >> sentence. External to what? (We know, will the reader? Doubtful..) Does = it >> matter to the story? No. >> >> Introducing an unclear distinction is a distraction, and as it is >> unnecessary should be removed. >> >> I=92ve also cleared up some grammar issues in the text (which don=92t af= fect >> meaning) > We hacked on it together and besides having good fun due to our various > locations and lag, I think we improved the text. As far as I am concerned= I > feel it is good to go. Nepomuk is now mentioned but I think it is done in= the > right way and context: it was the EU project. We suggest 'our' Semantic S= earch > is separate. > > All good with it this way? > Sounds good. It reads well, reports accurately and gives praise where due. I particularly like the way that we worked our way to a consensus = announcement. Carl _______________________________________________ This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. Visit https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo to unsubscribe, set d= igest on or temporarily stop your subscription.