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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] Proposal: KDE Manifesto wording revision
From:       Kevin Ottens <ervin () kde ! org>
Date:       2013-11-12 20:24:05
Message-ID: 2187648.iVK1gQY5GP () wintermute
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Hello,

On Monday 11 November 2013 10:21:52 Aaron J. Seigo wrote:
> On Sunday, November 10, 2013 18:28:58 Kevin Ottens wrote:
> > Any opinions on this?
> 
> second read on a monday morning:
> 
> "Interact with teams that have common values, leadin to the
> cross-pollination of ideas and innovations"
> 
> to
> 
> "Interaction with ..."
> 
> since you changed "Stand on" to "To stand on", the language is now active
> rather than passive so let's keep that consistent

Applied that change.

> "All KDE contributor accounts get direct (and universal) write access to the
> software assets"
> 
> to
> 
> "All KDE contributor accounts are granted direct, universal write access to
> the software assets"
> 
> rational: removes the specialness of "universal" by putting it in brackets
> (which usually means it is an afterthought or further explanation, while in
> this case it is an attribute of the granting)
> 
> also "grant" sounds less informal than "get", but perhaps that's just
> personal taste

Dropped that proposal due to the discussion in the other sub-thread.

Cheers.
=2D- 
Kévin Ottens, http://ervin.ipsquad.net

KDAB - proud supporter of KDE, http://www.kdab.com

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