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Subject:    Re: [mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-05.txt
From:       Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan () gmail ! com>
Date:       2018-11-21 5:36:15
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Stig, Hi!

Much Thanks for the review! The latest version of the draft fixes the typo
specified below (Diff --
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06).

Regards,
-Pavan (on behalf of the authors)

On Tue, Nov 20, 2018 at 1:36 PM Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this
> draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or
> routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG
> review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is
> to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about
> the Routing Directorate, please see
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,
> it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other
> IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them
> through discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-05.txt
> Reviewer: Stig Venaas
> Review Date: November 20, 2018
> IETF LC End Date:
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> Summary:
> No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
>
> Comments:
> The document is very well written. It is quite easy to read and of
> good quality. I could not find any issues, except the nit mentioned
> below.
>
> Major Issues:
> No major issues found.
>
> Minor Issues:
> No minor issues found.
>
> Nits:
> I found one typo at the end of 9.4. The word "failurei".
>
> Regards,
> Stig
>
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<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div>Stig, Hi!</div><div><br></div><div>Much Thanks for \
the review! The latest version of the draft fixes the typo specified below (Diff -- \
<a href="https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06">http \
s://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06</a>).</div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div>-Pavan \
(on behalf of the authors)<br></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div \
dir="ltr">On Tue, Nov 20, 2018 at 1:36 PM Stig Venaas &lt;<a \
href="mailto:stig@venaas.com">stig@venaas.com</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote \
class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc \
solid;padding-left:1ex">Hello,<br> <br>
I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this<br>
draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or<br>
routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG<br>
review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is<br>
to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about<br>
the Routing Directorate, please see<br>
<a href="http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir" rel="noreferrer" \
target="_blank">http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir</a><br> <br>
Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,<br>
it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other<br>
IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them<br>
through discussion or by updating the draft.<br>
<br>
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-05.txt<br>
Reviewer: Stig Venaas<br>
Review Date: November 20, 2018<br>
IETF LC End Date:<br>
Intended Status: Standards Track<br>
<br>
Summary:<br>
No issues found. This document is ready for publication.<br>
<br>
Comments:<br>
The document is very well written. It is quite easy to read and of<br>
good quality. I could not find any issues, except the nit mentioned<br>
below.<br>
<br>
Major Issues:<br>
No major issues found.<br>
<br>
Minor Issues:<br>
No minor issues found.<br>
<br>
Nits:<br>
I found one typo at the end of 9.4. The word &quot;failurei&quot;.<br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
Stig<br>
<br>
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