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List:       mercurial-devel
Subject:    Re: [PATCH] help: describe bundle compression methods (issue1523)
From:       timeless <timeless () gmail ! com>
Date:       2009-06-28 5:14:27
Message-ID: 26b395e60906272214s2e2a353atd04577ceba81dd59 () mail ! gmail ! com
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On Sat, Jun 27, 2009 at 3:27 PM, Stefano Mioli<jstevie@gmail.com> wrote:
> What about rewriting the first sentence as follows?
>
> "You can change compression method by means of the -t/--type option."

that's slightly better.

i'd replace "by means of" with "with"
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