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List:       kmail-devel
Subject:    Re: We need a short boilerplate text for KMail for various flyers
From:       Simon Robins <mail () srobins ! org>
Date:       2002-07-30 10:57:30
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A couple of suggestions:
s/industries/industry's

Explain what OpenPGP is e.g:
It features the industry's leading OpenPGP encryption integration

I'd also double check with the owners of those URLs to check they aren't going 
anywhere.

Here's my version with a couple of minor grammar changes (makes sense to a 
British English speaker anyway!):

KMail, KDE's award-winning[1,2], and easy to use mail client offers support 
for all major Email standards including IMAP, POP3 and S/MIME[3]. It was 
designed with security in mind, protects your privacy and is immune to 
viruses and webbugs. It features the industry's leading OpenPGP encryption 
integration, powerful filtering components, native support for the robust 
Maildir folder format and innovative mailing list handling.
KMail has repeatedly been the subject of promotion by the German 
government[3,4].

 [1] http://www.linuxplanet.com/linuxplanet/reviews/3979/7/
 [2] http://www.ofb.biz/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=146
 [3] http://www.gnupg.org/aegypten
 [4] t.b.a., see kde-pim ml


On Sunday 28 July 2002 00:08, Marc Mutz wrote:
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> On Sunday 28 July 2002 00:49, Marc Mutz wrote:
> > ... although it's probably too late for the next series of flyers ;-(
> > Maybe we can put it on the homepage and on the Introduction page?
> >
> > My proposal (draft):
>
> Almost forgot the most important thing ;-)
>
> KMail, KDE's award-winning[1,2], easy to use mail client, offers support
> for all major EMail standards including IMAP, POP3 and S/MIME[3]. It
> was designed with security in mind, protects your privacy and is immune
> to viruses and webbugs. It features the industries leading OpenPGP
> integration, one of the most powerful filtering components, native
> support for the robust Maildir folder format and innovative mailing
> list handling.
>   KMail repeatedly was the subject of promotion by the German
> Government[3,4].
>
> [1] http://www.linuxplanet.com/linuxplanet/reviews/3979/7/
> [2] http://www.ofb.biz/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=146
> [3] http://www.gnupg.org/aegypten
> [4] t.b.a., see kde-pim ml
>
> Marc
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