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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] Article about Baloo
From:       Jos Poortvliet <jospoortvliet () gmail ! com>
Date:       2014-02-22 10:03:41
Message-ID: 1404862.DrbK3EElNp () linux-dzru ! site
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On Friday 21 February 2014 09:16:33 Carl Symons wrote:
> On 02/21/2014 03:34 AM, Jos Poortvliet wrote:
> > On Friday 21 February 2014 11:47:05 Aaron J. Seigo wrote:
> > > On Friday, February 21, 2014 09:22:52 Stuart Jarvis wrote:
> > > > "developed in a European Union funded research project"
> > > > would become
> > > > "developed in a European Union funded research project (NEPOMUK)".
> > > 
> > > imo not only should Nepomuk be mentioned in this fasion for the reasons
> > > Stuart mentions, but the word "external" should be dropped from the
> > > sentence. External to what? (We know, will the reader? Doubtful..) Does
> > > it
> > > matter to the story? No.
> > > 
> > > Introducing an unclear distinction is a distraction, and as it is
> > > unnecessary should be removed.
> > > 
> > > I've also cleared up some grammar issues in the text (which don't affect
> > > meaning)
> > 
> > We hacked on it together and besides having good fun due to our various
> > locations and lag, I think we improved the text. As far as I am concerned
> > I
> > feel it is good to go. Nepomuk is now mentioned but I think it is done in
> > the right way and context: it was the EU project. We suggest 'our'
> > Semantic Search is separate.
> > 
> > All good with it this way?
> 
> Sounds good. It reads well, reports accurately and gives praise where due.
> 
> I particularly like the way that we worked our way to a consensus
> announcement.

+1 on that. So, I will transfer the current text to the dot and get it ready 
for publishing on Monday.

Will look for a fitting picture (articles without pictures are boring), 
suggestions welcome. If we can't find anything I'll use the pic I just took of 
Vishesh talking about relationships ;-)

J

> Carl
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