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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] booklet
From:       Stuart Jarvis <stuart.jarvis () gmail ! com>
Date:       2010-09-14 12:31:45
Message-ID: 201009141331.46313.stuart.jarvis () gmail ! com
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On Tuesday 14 September 2010 09:37:42 Felix Michel wrote:
> sorry,
> so i failed to upload it correctly.
> my fault. now it should be up.

Yeah, what were you thinking? :-p If any of us has never sent an email missing 
an attachment, misquoted a web address or missed an upload then maybe one of 
us can complain ;-)

> > On Tuesday 14 September 2010 00:08:24 Felix Michel wrote:
> > > i dont like how i put the screenshots and the screenshots arent
> > > readable at all.

These are not so bad. Something that you could try is rotating the screenshots 
on a bit of an angle (I'm not sure if that would look good - so only maybe).

I also think you are right that something like the Kontact screenshot does not 
work that well - people know what a mail reader looks like and there is too 
much detail to see clearly. Perhaps you could try one of the other 
applications such as blogilo (a bit more unusual) or maybe you could try the 
Kontact summary page which is a bit simpler and prettier.

Perhaps others have some better ideas?

Otherwise, it's looking good. There are a couple of things:
- we should probably use the "" (or '') style of quotations as it is an 
English text
- torrent probably does not need the quotation marks at all as it is quite a 
well known term
- the one heading 'Let's take a look at some of them!' doesn't seem right to 
me as I would like to be able to look at the headings and decide if I want to 
read that section, but I don't know what 'them' are. Maybe 'Kontact Features' 
or 'KDE's communication components'. But neither of those are very good. Does 
someone have a better wording?

Thanks for pressing on with this. Doing the layout is not something that's 
easily shared, but if there's stuff we can help with please let us know.

Cheers,
Stu
 
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