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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] KAboutKdeDialog needs one more Rebranding effort
From:       Jos Poortvliet <jospoortvliet () gmail ! com>
Date:       2009-12-28 17:16:54
Message-ID: 5847e5cf0912280916y65a0a8f8i5cfdd39e941bcf42 () mail ! gmail ! com
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On Mon, Dec 28, 2009 at 5:07 PM, Friedrich W. H. Kossebau
<kossebau@kde.org> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> the last tab ("Support KDE") of the About-KDE dialog (in all help menus) in
> trunk needs an update, as it still uses KDE if referring to our, uhm, output.
> Besides appending a "Software from " to the start I have not good proposal how
> to change it, so perhaps somebody here with a better skill in English and
> language can give it a try?
>

tnx for spotting it...


> trunk/KDE/kdelibs/kdeui/dialogs/kaboutkdedialog_p.cpp:
>    support->setText(i18n("<html>"
>        "KDE is available free of charge, but costs are incurred and assets
> formed in its creation.<br /><br />"
>        "Thus, the KDE community formed KDE e.V., a non-profit organization"
>        " legally founded in Tuebingen, Germany. KDE e.V. represents"
>        " the KDE community in legal and financial matters."
>        " See <a href=\"http://www.kde-ev.org/\">http://www.kde-ev.org</a>"
>        " for information on KDE e.V.<br /><br />"
>        "KDE benefits from financial support. Most of the funds raised are
> used to "
>        "reimburse members and others for expenses they incur when "
>        "contributing to KDE. You are encouraged to support KDE through a
> financial "
>        "donation, using one of the ways described at "
>        "<a
> href=\"http://www.kde.org/support/\">http://www.kde.org/support/</a>."
>        "<br /><br />Thank you very much in advance for your support.</html>")
> + "<br /><br />"); // FIXME: ugly <br /> at the end...
>
> So what would be a better text?

The changes can be minimal. Change the first "KDE" to "KDE Software"
and we're basically done.

The text ain't perfect indeed (as the comment on the bottom sais) but
it's ok enough if we want to keep changes minimal before this freeze.

A full rewrite of the text could be something like this:

support->setText(i18n("<html>"
"KDE software is and will always be available free of charge, however
creating it is not free.<br /><br />"
"To support development the KDE community has formed the KDE e.V., a
non-profit organization "
"legally founded in Germany. KDE e.V. represents the KDE community in
legal and financial matters. "
"See <a href=\"http://www.kde-ev.org/\">http://www.kde-ev.org</a>"
" for information on KDE e.V.<br /><br />"
"KDE benefits from many kinds of contributions, including financial. "
"We use the funds to reimburse members and others for expenses "
"they incur when contributing. Further funds are used for legal "
"support and organizing conferences and meetings. <br /> <br />"
"We would like to encourage you to support our efforts with a "
"financial donation, using one of the ways described at "
"<a href=\"http://www.kde.org/support/\">http://www.kde.org/support/</a>."
"<br /><br />Thank you very much in advance for your support.</html>")
+ "<br /><br />");

> I would do the contact with the i18n people to ask for an exception from the
> freeze, if you will not do this yourself.

Please do. Ask them if they are OK with the rewrite or prefer the minor change.

> Cheers
> Friedrich
> --
> Okteta - KDE Hex Editor - http://utils.kde.org/projects/okteta
>
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