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Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] KDE SC 4.3.4 dot story -- quick review?
From:       Stuart Jarvis <stuart.jarvis () gmail ! com>
Date:       2009-12-01 14:56:30
Message-ID: 200912011456.30344.stuart.jarvis () gmail ! com
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On Tuesday 01 December 2009 14:13:57 Sebastian Kügler wrote:
> On Tuesday 01 December 2009 13:28:16 Stuart Jarvis wrote:
> > "KDE has now entered the stabilization period for 4.4" is a little
> > ambiguous -  it's easy to read that as KDE, the software. So maybe "the
> > KDE team has now entered..."
> 
> Minor thing, but I think using "KDE has entered ..." is fine, since it's
> implicitely "new branding style". If you want to change it though, please
> go ahead. :)
> 
I think the way I read it was more to do with my residual attachment to KDE 
being software rather than the actual sentence itself. I shall takes steps 
towards self-correction ;-)

> > Couple of observations on the actual release announcement, not sure if
> > they  can/should be changed
> > 
> > It includes a link to itself ("this month's edition of KDE SC")
> > It uses terms like KDE 4.3 and KDE 4.3.4 in several places - should all
> > of these switch to KDE SC now or do we save that until 4.4?
> 
> I've changed those where I saw fit and it didn't sound stupid. :)
> 
Cool, looks good to me.

Stu
 
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