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Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] KDE SC 4.3.4 dot story -- quick review?
From:       Sebastian =?iso-8859-1?q?K=FCgler?= <sebas () kde ! org>
Date:       2009-12-01 14:13:57
Message-ID: 200912011513.57421.sebas () kde ! org
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On Tuesday 01 December 2009 13:28:16 Stuart Jarvis wrote:
> On Tuesday 01 December 2009 12:06:30 Sebastian Kügler wrote:
> > http://dot.kde.org/2009/12/01/kde-sc-434-released-codename-cold
> > 
> > I'd like this to go out anytime now, the text is short but it would
> >  nevertheless be good if someone could do a sanity check. Shouldn't take
> >  more than 5 minutes. :)
> > 
> 
> I'd suggest:
> 
> Plasma desktop -> Plasma Desktop (or KDE workspaces if you want to include 
> Plasma Netbook, since talking there about 4.4)
> 
> "KDE has now entered the stabilization period for 4.4" is a little
>  ambiguous -  it's easy to read that as KDE, the software. So maybe "the
>  KDE team has now entered..."

Minor thing, but I think using "KDE has entered ..." is fine, since it's implicitely 
"new branding style". If you want to change it though, please go ahead. :)

> (I didn't make any edits to the article as there are multiple options)
> 
> Couple of observations on the actual release announcement, not sure if
>  they  can/should be changed
> 
> It includes a link to itself ("this month's edition of KDE SC")
> It uses terms like KDE 4.3 and KDE 4.3.4 in several places - should all of 
> these switch to KDE SC now or do we save that until 4.4?

I've changed those where I saw fit and it didn't sound stupid. :)

Thanks,
-- 
sebas

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