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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] About KDE dialog text
From:       "Aaron J. Seigo" <aseigo () kde ! org>
Date:       2009-11-12 8:43:44
Message-ID: 200911120043.45198.aseigo () kde ! org
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On November 10, 2009, Thomas Thym wrote:
> Very nice!
> 
> Just two minor comments.
> 
> First paragraph: I would mention KDE also with SD.
> 
> "... KDE Development Platform and KDE Software Distribution" instead of
> "... KDE Development Platform and Software Distribution".

a bit pedantic, but also clearer. done.
 
> Second paragraph: The word "enterprise" was a little bit strange for me. I
>  associated it with "corporate / commercial enterprise".

the professional leaning is intentional; an 'enterprise' is "a purposeful or 
industrious undertaking" ... or a space ship with a vulcan and a hot headed 
captain who does well with the alien life forms. ;)

anyways ... communicating :)

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