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Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] building a common visual brand
From:       Jos Poortvliet <jospoortvliet () gmail ! com>
Date:       2009-06-05 10:23:13
Message-ID: 5847e5cf0906050323y9998ab0ve584371a9e09b679 () mail ! gmail ! com
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First of all, I like it. Good idea, and a good start (not too
ambitious but still there is a challenging goal for the future). And
well written too.

Second, I think it is a bit long. But I also don't have many
suggestions to shorten it...

Third, nitpicks:
Thos -> Those
usualy -> usually
That requires design that impacts you >on< positively at an emotional level

Last, about the future - I'd say as soon as 1 or 2 distro's have
actually joined us, a dot story would be a good idea ;-)

grtz

Jos


On Fri, Jun 5, 2009 at 1:09 AM, Aaron J. Seigo<aseigo@kde.org> wrote:
> On Thursday 04 June 2009, Chani wrote:
> > > before it goes out, however, i'll do a round or two of editing on it (so
> > > feedback on that first draft, which is really just
> > > stream-of-consciousness writing is welcome and desired; there's probably
> > > a ton of verbage that can get whacked in there) and i need to get
> > > confirmation and express permission from our art team as well :)
> > 
> > spelling/grammar nitpicks:
> 
> thanks.. new version uploaded, this time with a bit more structure. couple
> more editing rounds to go! :)
> 
> > "We'd like to work on breaking the barriers to solving this issue down."
> > this sentence is awkward. maybe "We'd like to work on breaking down the
> > barriers to solving this issue." ...but that feels a little awkward too.
> 
> We'd like to break down barriers to addresing this issue productively.
> 
> > "remember that we sell about as many KDE desktops worldwide via retail
> > every year as Applet does)"
> > Apple :)
> 
> guess what word i type far too many times every day while coding? ;)
> 
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> Aaron J. Seigo
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