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Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] beta1 release next week
From:       "Jos Poortvliet" <jos () mijnkamer ! nl>
Date:       2007-08-01 13:41:24
Message-ID: 5c77e14b0708010641q5e4b239bpb384a2ada6478e33 () mail ! gmail ! com
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On 8/1/07, Josef Spillner <spillner@kde.org> wrote:
>
> On Wednesday 01 August 2007 13:44:50 Jos Poortvliet wrote:
> > And everybody else as well - you're ALWAYS qualified to give comments,
> > and it only takes a minute or two to go through this.
>
> s/powerfull/powerful/
>
> Beta is written with a capital B, whereas the second paragraph contains
> alpha
> with a lowercase a. Maybe a link to the release plan can be smuggled in
> there.
>
> Describing Marble being "a lot like Google Earth" at the beginning is not
> something I'd do. Rather, since you already started the whole text
> with "integration", you could pick up the term again and say, as something
> like a side remark: "Marble can be used to view KMZ map files from Google
> Earth."
> (I'd also strictly capitalise Google, Wikipedia and all other such names.
> It's
> KWin, not Kwin.)
>
> The "not ready" statement/tagline about kdelibs is too bold, IMO.
> Especially
> since developers are requested to take a look now if they haven't done so
> already. A more positive wording would be "getting ready".


All done.

Just those nitpicks - the overall style is good.


No, not nitpicks - this is exactly the type of comments I'm looking for.
They make the difference between mediocre and good. Thank you!!!!!

Josef
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On 8/1/07, <b class="gmail_sendername">Josef Spillner</b> &lt;<a \
href="mailto:spillner@kde.org">spillner@kde.org</a>&gt; wrote:<div><span \
class="gmail_quote"></span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px \
solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;"> On \
Wednesday 01 August 2007 13:44:50 Jos Poortvliet wrote:<br>&gt; And everybody else as \
well - you&#39;re ALWAYS qualified to give comments,<br>&gt; and it only takes a \
minute or two to go through this.<br><br>s/powerfull/powerful/ <br><br>Beta is \
written with a capital B, whereas the second paragraph contains alpha<br>with a \
lowercase a. Maybe a link to the release plan can be smuggled \
in<br>there.<br><br>Describing Marble being &quot;a lot like Google Earth&quot; at \
the beginning is not <br>something I&#39;d do. Rather, since you already started the \
whole text<br>with &quot;integration&quot;, you could pick up the term again and say, \
as something<br>like a side remark: &quot;Marble can be used to view KMZ map files \
from Google <br>Earth.&quot;<br>(I&#39;d also strictly capitalise Google, Wikipedia \
and all other such names. It&#39;s<br>KWin, not Kwin.)<br><br>The &quot;not \
ready&quot; statement/tagline about kdelibs is too bold, IMO. Especially<br> since \
developers are requested to take a look now if they haven&#39;t done so<br>already. A \
more positive wording would be &quot;getting ready&quot;.</blockquote><div><br>All \
done. <br></div><br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid \
rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;"> Just those \
nitpicks - the overall style is good.</blockquote><div><br>No, not nitpicks - this is \
exactly the type of comments I&#39;m looking for. They make the difference between \
mediocre and good. Thank you!!!!! <br></div> <br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" \
style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; \
padding-left: 1ex;">Josef<br><br>_______________________________________________<br>This \
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href="https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo">https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo</a> \
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