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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] now it's really done
From:       Oswald Buddenhagen <ossi () kde ! org>
Date:       2007-06-27 7:57:20
Message-ID: 20070627075720.GA5629 () ugly ! local
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On Tue, Jun 26, 2007 at 10:47:25PM +0200, Olaf Schmidt wrote:
> Some nitpicks:
> 
some more from me:
- maybe it's just xpdf, but the cover and back page have a "step" in the
  left edge of the background box.
  btw, i find it somewhat dark. pretty spooky ... and a lot of wasted
  toner. :)
- page 8, first section:
  - first paragraph: arguable, but i guess "open source" should be
    capitalized
  - second paragraph: why this in small italics? i see no point in it
    and it is harder to read than necessary.
- page 10:
  - edutainment: the names of the concrete games should be capitalized,
    i think.
  - "software development" is not bold. not using text styles, huh? ;)
- page 11: as noted before, the initial release of kde was in 1998. but
  maybe you prefer to talk about the inception in 1996.
- page 13: canonical is misspelled in the 3rd line from bottom.
  btw, it sounds strange to have kubuntu being declared as the sponsor,
  not canonical itself. but i see the advantage. :)

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