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Subject:    [kde-promo] Fwd: Press release suggestions
From:       Fabrice Mous <fabrice () kde ! nl>
Date:       2005-06-01 8:00:12
Message-ID: 200506011000.13032.fabrice () kde ! nl
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Hi all, 

This message was sent to kde-www and Andy look at our KDE 3.4 press release. I 
invited him over here to help on these kind of announcements. 



Fabrice 

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Subject: Press release suggestions
Date: Monday 30 May 2005 09:51
From: Andy Fielding <xxx@xxx>
To: KDE Project <webmaster@kde.org>

Hi,

I'm a writer and editor here in western Canada, and a big KDE fan.

I was reading your KDE 3.4 press release, and thought I could offer
some suggestions for your text. Onscreen text is hard to read (only
72-92 dots per inch, vs. 1200-2400 in print), so it really helps
people when you keep your messages clear and concise.

Here are my ideas for the first part of your release. (I'm on a
Windows computer at the moment, so I've used MS Word---sorry about
that---but you should be able to open it in Open Office, of course.)

Please let me know if I can help any more.

Cheers, Andy
--
Andy Fielding
Commercial and technical writer, editor
Vancouver, BC
(604) 448-0024

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