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List:       kde-promo
Subject:    Re: [kde-promo] KDE 3.3 release announcement
From:       Tom Chance <lists () tomchance ! org ! uk>
Date:       2004-08-17 19:50:30
Message-ID: 200408172050.30694.lists () tomchance ! org ! uk
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On Monday 16 Aug 2004 18:55, Alex Nordstrom wrote:
> On Monday, 16 Aug 2004 19:36, Aaron Seigo wrote:
> > 	Said Stephan Kulow, KDE Release Coordinator: "
> > 
> > should be something like:
> > 
> > 	KDE's Release Coordinator, Stephan Kulow, said, "
> > 
> > or:
> > 
> > 	Stephan Kulow, the Release Coordinator for KDE, remarked, "
> > 
> > but "Said Stephen Kulow" is not proper English =)
> 
> Yes it is.

It is proper English, but it's a slightly odd sentence order. It's usually 
best to make sentences as "comfortable" as possible, especially for busy 
journalists :)

Regards,
Tom
 
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