All these points and direction looks good to me.

On Jul 27, 2017 14:28, "Raghavendra Kamath" <raghu@raghukamath.com> wrote:
On 2017 Jul 27 20:30:51, Thorsten Wilms wrote:

> Nitpicking, but comics and animations should be paired, as they are more
> closely related than with any other item, I'd say.

Yes, I agree.

> > Krita supports artists by working together with them to create an application
> > that supports their creative workflow.
>
> The double "supports" should be edited out.

This is right too.

> "
> Krita is Free Software for sketching and painting, made for artists with
> demanding needs. It offers a complete solution for creating digital art from
> scratch. To this end, it's optimized for frequent, prolonged and focused
> use.
>
> Explicitly supported fields are illustrations, concept art, matte painting,
> textures, comics and animations.
>
> Krita is freely available on several platforms and developed in the open.
> Artists can get and are involved, making sure it is continually enhanced
> regarding actual needs and workflows.
> "

This is much better.

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