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List:       kde-i18n-doc
Subject:    Re: [grammar doubt]
From:       Burkhard =?iso-8859-1?q?L=FCck?= <lueck () hube-lueck ! de>
Date:       2012-05-26 8:39:04
Message-ID: 201205261039.04450.lueck () hube-lueck ! de
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Am Samstag, 26. Mai 2012, 09:58:55 schrieb Anne-Marie Mahfouf:
> On 05/25/2012 11:50 PM, mvillarino wrote:
> > @ docmessages/kde-runtime/kcontrol_emoticons.
> > 
> > The Design will be removed from the disk if you click
> > <guibutton>Apply</guibutton>  or leave this module confirming to apply
> > your change.
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > My doubt is in the "or leave this...". This seems strange to me, as I
> > would expect an explicit subject before the verb "to leave" (e.g. "or
> > if you leave").
> > So, is the phrase "the design will be removed .. if you click ... or
> > leave ...." correct ?
> > 
> > Kind regards,
> > Marce Villarino
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I wrote this doc. This is about the Emoticons Theme Manager in
> SystemSettings. The sentence is really bad indeed. "The Design" should
> be "The Theme"
> 
> "The Theme will be removed from the disk if you click Apply" <- this I
> can probably change
> 
> The second part of the sentence tries to explain that if you do not
> click Apply but leave the System Settings Emoticon page then you get a
> dialog to confirm your change and if you confirm, the Theme will be
> removed from your disk.
> 
> Not sure how to explain this. Not sure if I am allowed to change it anyway?
> 
Please commit the change to master, 4.9 docmentation is not yet in string 
freeze.

Thanks.

-- 
Burkhard Lück
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