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List:       kde-doc-english
Subject:    Re: [kde-doc-english] JuK Cover Management documentation
From:       Anders Lund <anders () alweb ! dk>
Date:       2005-10-09 7:38:17
Message-ID: 200510090938.19068.anders () alweb ! dk
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On Sunday 09 October 2005 02:47, Michael Pyne wrote:
> As suggested by Philip Rodrigues, I've gone ahead and compiled some of the
> new features from the JuK Cover Manager that will be in KDE 3.5, which I
> have recently blogged about.
>
> My non-marked-up version is attached.  If anyone has questions or needs
> clarifications, please let me know.  Also please CC: me, as I'm not
> subscribed.

I think using the word 'code' in user documentation like you do here is wrong. 
I suggest using the word 'feature' instead in the first case (very first 
sentence):

"JuK 2.3 (part of KDE 3.5) includes an improved cover management feature with 
introduces some ..."

In the second case, in the section 'How Covers work in JuK 2.3' I suggest 
replacing it with 'cover mangement'
"In JuK 2.3, the cover management was redesigned to ..."


In the first sentence, 'with' should probably be 'which':

"management feature which introduces some ..."

-anders
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