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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
From:       David Jarvie <djarvie () kde ! org>
Date:       2016-03-15 22:53:03
Message-ID: 4748F4FB-74F5-45BE-B28C-7BC14B066D99 () kde ! org
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On 15 March 2016 21:15:38 GMT+00:00, Alexander Neundorf <neundorf@kde.org> wrote:
>On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 08:26:15 Stephen Kelly wrote:
>> Lydia Pintscher wrote:
>> > Hi everyone,
>> > 
>> > "A world in which everyone enjoys freedom and privacy and has
>control
>> > over their digital life."
>> > 
>> > Unless there are major objections within the next week I would like
>to
>> > conclude the process and from now on use this as our vision
>statement.
>> 
>> Not a major objection, but some feedback: It's very wordy at the end
>> especially with all the 'and's in it.
>
>I agree, the two "and"'s sound a bit bumpy/"holprig".
>
>I very much like that freedom is in there, this fit's my wish to
>express some 
>kind of independence.
>How about skipping the "privacy" ? This is with no or only very little 
>interpretation included in "have control".


This may read a bit better, although it does slightly alter the emphasis:

"A world in which everyone has control over their digital life and enjoys freedom and privacy."

--
David Jarvie
KAlarm author, KDE developer
http://www.astrojar.org.UK/KAlarm
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