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List:       kde-community
Subject:    Re: [kde-community] finding a clear vision for KDE - final version
From:       Alexander Neundorf <neundorf () kde ! org>
Date:       2016-03-15 21:15:38
Message-ID: 5175110.t12ZibH5TM () tuxedo ! neundorf ! net
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2016 08:26:15 Stephen Kelly wrote:
> Lydia Pintscher wrote:
> > Hi everyone,
> > 
> > "A world in which everyone enjoys freedom and privacy and has control
> > over their digital life."
> > 
> > Unless there are major objections within the next week I would like to
> > conclude the process and from now on use this as our vision statement.
> 
> Not a major objection, but some feedback: It's very wordy at the end
> especially with all the 'and's in it.

I agree, the two "and"'s sound a bit bumpy/"holprig".

I very much like that freedom is in there, this fit's my wish to express some 
kind of independence.
How about skipping the "privacy" ? This is with no or only very little 
interpretation included in "have control".

Alex

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