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List:       kde-community
Subject:    [kde-community] Proposal: KDE Manifesto wording revision
From:       Kevin Ottens <ervin () kde ! org>
Date:       2013-11-10 17:28:58
Message-ID: 2788595.49uHkfCS55 () wintermute
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Hello community,

After the publication of the initial version of the manifesto, I said I'd act 
as curator for the time being and that it should be a living document which 
would get updated from time to time.

I didn't really live up to it so far as no revision has been done. But somehow 
I found a small chunk of time today and decided to use it to prepare a new 
revision.

As a matter of fact, I got some feedback from people. Some of the items are 
rather large (and I'll send separate emails for those), but there was a 
collection of nice wording simplifications.

That's what this email is about, I'd like to apply the attached patch, it's 
mostly about small scale changes. I don't see anything which could be 
controversial in there.

Any opinions on this? I'd like to collect feedback before proceeding with a 
vote of the e.V. membership and then a push.

Regards.
-- 
Kévin Ottens, http://ervin.ipsquad.net

KDAB - proud supporter of KDE, http://www.kdab.com


["manifesto-minor-wording-revision.patch" (manifesto-minor-wording-revision.patch)]

diff --git a/benefits.markdown b/benefits.markdown
index 0cdad69..78ec683 100644
--- a/benefits.markdown
+++ b/benefits.markdown
@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@
 layout: page
 title: Benefits of a KDE Project
 ---
-Being part of the international KDE community conveys certain benefits and rights. \
These include: +Being part of the international KDE community conveys certain \
benefits:  
-* Stand on the shoulders of giants
+* To stand on the shoulders of giants
   * Make use of KDE infrastructure for project hosting
   * Benefit from the experience of the KDE sysadmins
   * Get support from the larger community with development, documentation, \
                translation, testing, bug handling, etc.
   * Use opportunities to integrate with a large ecosystem of end-user products
-  * Create cross-pollination of ideas and innovation through interaction with teams \
sharing common values +  * Interact with teams that have common values, leadin to the \
                cross-pollination of ideas and innovations
 * Enjoy representation and support by KDE e.V.
   * Participate in Akademy and other KDE events
-  * Be considered for financial and organizational support
-  * Know that your trademark can be secured
-  * Know that your project's license can be defended via the [Fiduciary Licensing \
Agreement](http://ev.kde.org/rules/fla.php) +  * Receive financial and organizational \
support +  * Know that your trademarks can be secured
+  * Know that your licensing wishes will be protected via the [Fiduciary Licensing \
                Agreement](http://ev.kde.org/rules/fla.php)
 * Increase your market visibility through the reputation of the KDE community and \
KDE  promotion tools such as:
   * pushing project announcements to the Dot and employing other KDE promotion \
channels @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Being part of the international KDE community conveys \
certain benefits and right  for communication on web sites and other channels
 
 <div class="addendum">
-<a href="principles.html">Principles of a KDE Project</a><br/>
+<a href="commitments.html">Commitments of a KDE Project</a><br/>
 <a href="index.html">Back to the manifesto</a>
 </div>
 
diff --git a/commitments.markdown b/commitments.markdown
index b046224..7824919 100644
--- a/commitments.markdown
+++ b/commitments.markdown
@@ -1,27 +1,25 @@
 ---
 layout: page
-title: Principles of a KDE Project
+title: Commitments of a KDE Project
 ---
-The KDE Project designation carries certain principles and requirements:
+The KDE Project designation carries with it certain commitments:
 
 * Support the [KDE Code of Conduct](http://www.kde.org/code-of-conduct/)
 * There is no mandatory Contributor License Agreement
 * Technical requirements
   * The project stays true to established practices common to similar KDE projects
     unless special considerations force it to deviate
-  * Software assets access model
-    * Direct write access to the software assets is granted only to KDE contributor \
                accounts
-    * Direct write access to the software assets is granted to all KDE contributor \
accounts +  * All KDE contributor accounts get direct (and universal) write access to \
                the software assets
   * Projects that choose not to host their web services on KDE infrastructure need \
                to provide
     administrative access to the KDE sysadmin team; or, if such access cannot be \
                granted,
     a regular backup of all the code and data used by the web services should be \
                provided to
     the KDE sysadmins (except if the service is not an integral part of the \
                project's workflow,
     community interactions and public image) to ensure continued availability
 * Copyrights, trademarks and patents
-  * [KDE licensing policy](http://techbase.kde.org/Policies/Licensing_Policy) should \
                be respected
-  * KDE branding guidelines should be respected
-  * Trademark continuity – if the authors of the software abandon it or disappear, \
                they agree to transfer the trademark to the next maintainer
-  * Patent License - If the code is covered by patents registered by the project \
itself, those patents must be licensed freely +  * [KDE licensing \
policy](http://techbase.kde.org/Policies/Licensing_Policy) must be respected +  * KDE \
branding guidelines are respected +  * If the authors of the software abandon it or \
disappear, they agree to transfer the trademark to the next maintainer +  * If the \
code is covered by patents registered by the project itself, those patents must be \
licensed freely  
 <div class="addendum">
 <a href="benefits.html">Benefits of a KDE Project</a><br/>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index ce3153f..3d2d53a 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@ leadership and decision processes;</div>
 
 <div>
 <span class="value">Free Software</span> to ensure the result of our work
-is available to all people;</div>
+is available to all people for all time;</div>
 
 <div>
-<span class="value">Inclusivity</span> to ensure that people of all origins
+<span class="value">Inclusivity</span> to ensure that all people
 are welcome to join us and participate;</div>
 
 <div>
@@ -37,5 +37,5 @@ items essential to define and stay true to ourselves.</div>
 
 <div class="addendum">From those values we derived the
 <a href="benefits.html">benefits</a> and
-<a href="principles.html">principles</a> of a KDE Project.</div>
+<a href="commitments.html">commitments</a> of a KDE Project.</div>
 </center>


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