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Subject:    [websites/hig-kde-org] source/introduction: Correct Grammar, Punctuation, and Words
From:       Nate Graham <null () kde ! org>
Date:       2018-09-12 23:06:12
Message-ID: E1g0ED6-0001zS-Du () code ! kde ! org
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Git commit ddb2d2ad831f34d98f77eb7102f875addcaf0ad8 by Nate Graham, on behalf of Andy \
Betts. Committed on 12/09/2018 at 23:06.
Pushed by ngraham into branch 'master'.

Correct Grammar, Punctuation, and Words

Summary: Corrections

Test Plan: NA

Reviewers: fabianr, ngraham

Reviewed By: fabianr, ngraham

Subscribers: abetts

Tags: #kde_human_interface_guidelines

Differential Revision: https://phabricator.kde.org/D15394

M  +4    -4    source/introduction/architecture.rst

https://commits.kde.org/websites/hig-kde-org/ddb2d2ad831f34d98f77eb7102f875addcaf0ad8

diff --git a/source/introduction/architecture.rst \
b/source/introduction/architecture.rst index 8799d5e..b64b3e2 100644
--- a/source/introduction/architecture.rst
+++ b/source/introduction/architecture.rst
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Architecture
 ============
 
-There are three different UI toolkits you can use to development for `KDE \
Application <https://www.kde.org/applications/>`_ or the `Plasma Workspace \
<https://www.kde.org/plasma-desktop.php>`_. Due to technical limitations the toolkits \
have slight visual differences, but the recommended interaction patterns to be used \
are consistent regardless of the toolkit. +There are three different UI toolkits you \
can use to development for `KDE Application <https://www.kde.org/applications/>`_ or \
the `Plasma Workspace <https://www.kde.org/plasma-desktop.php>`_ (Due to technical \
limitations, the toolkits have slight visual differences, but the recommended \
interaction patterns to be used are consistent regardless of the toolkit).  
 KDE Applications
 ----------------
@@ -12,13 +12,13 @@ There are two UI toolkits that can be used to develop KDE \
Applications:  
 Kirigami is KDE's lightweight user interface framework for mobile and convergent \
applications. It allows Qt developers to easily create applications that run on most \
major mobile and desktop platforms without modification (though adapted user \
interfaces for different form-factors are supported and recommended for optimal user \
experience). It extends the touch-friendly Qt Quick Controls with larger application \
building blocks.  
-Use Qt Widgets only, if you plan to develop a desktop only application with a \
complex UI, like KDevelop. +Use Qt Widgets only if you plan to develop a desktop-only \
application with a complex UI, like KDevelop.  
 .. figure:: /img/kirigami.jpg
    :scale: 25%
    :alt: Discover, a convergent application build with Kirigami
 
-   Discover, a convergent application build with Kirigami
+   Discover, a convergent application build using Kirigami
 
 Plasma Workspace
 ----------------
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Plasma is built on widgets, allowing you to move, mix, add, and \
remove just abou  
 Theme
 -----
-There are three different kind of themes influencing the the look and feel of KDE \
Application and the Plasma workspace. +There are three different kinds of themes \
influencing the the look-and-feel of KDE applications and the Plasma workspace.  
 * Workspace
 * Application


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