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Subject:    [websites/lakademy-kde-org] /: Review of about-en page by Frederico Goncalves
From:       Aracele Torres <null () kde ! org>
Date:       2017-04-30 20:15:45
Message-ID: E1d4vFx-0005mR-8E () code ! kde ! org
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Git commit a0d38e61f79af430cddf36a03ff1938d490d8a8b by Aracele Torres.
Committed on 30/04/2017 at 20:15.
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Review of about-en page by Frederico Goncalves

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https://commits.kde.org/websites/lakademy-kde-org/a0d38e61f79af430cddf36a03ff1938d490d8a8b

diff --git a/about-en.html b/about-en.html
index c91644e..1ebd331 100644
--- a/about-en.html
+++ b/about-en.html
@@ -69,19 +69,18 @@
          
          <figure>
          <img src="images/slider-image1.jpg" alt="" title="LaKademy 2012" border="0" class="entry_image" \
                />
-         <figcaption>Group photo with LaKademy 2012 attendees.</figcaption>
+         <figcaption>LaKademy 2012 attendees group photo.</figcaption>
          </figure>
          
-         <p>LaKademy - Latin America KDE Summit - is a meeting of <a href="https://www.kde.org/">KDE</a> \
community Latin American users and contributors, one of the largest free software communities in the \
world.</p> +         <p>LaKademy - Latin America KDE Summit - is a meeting of Latin American community of \
<a href="https://www.kde.org/">KDE</a> users and contributors.</p>  <br>
-         <p>The event has been held since 2012 and was a result of <a \
href="https://wiki.br.kde.org/Akademy-BR_2010">Akademy-Br</a>, the only edition of the KDE Brazilian \
contributors meeting held in 2010. After Akademy-Br, it became clear that a meeting should integrate not \
only Brazilians but contributors from all over Latin America.</p> +         <p>This event exists since \
2012 and is a result of <a href="https://wiki.br.kde.org/Akademy-BR_2010">Akademy-Br</a>, the only \
edition of the KDE Brazilian contributors meeting, in 2010. After Akademy-Br, it was clear that we should \
have a meeting that integrates not only Brazilians, but other Latin American contributors.</p>  <br>
-         <p>The main goal of LaKademy, therefore, is to promote face-to-face meetings of KDE Latin \
                American community, allowing a moment of immersion
-        in community projects. LaKademy aims to function as a space of:</p>
+         <p>The main goal of LaKademy is to promote personal meetings of KDE Latin American community, \
allowing moments of immersion in community projects. LaKademy aims to be a space of:</p>  <br>
             <ul>
                 <li>Exchange of ideas about projects and initiatives between different members of the \
                community;</li>
-                <li>Hacking sessions in which contributors put their hands on the projects;</li>
+                <li>Hacking sessions in which contributors put their hands on projects;</li>
                 <li>Planning future actions for KDE in Latin America and the world;</li>
                 <li>Presentation of the project for new and potential contributors.</li>
         
@@ -101,9 +100,9 @@
             
             <h2>Donate to KDE</h2>
             
-            <p>KDE community projects are developed and maintained by volunteers from around the world \
and are freely available to anyone.</p>  +            <p>KDE community projects are developed and \
maintained by volunteers around the world and are freely available to anyone.</p>   <br>
-            <p>Your donation is very important to help maintain the community work, with it we cover \
costs with servers and contributors meetings, such as LaKademy, among other things. Donating is an easy, \
quick and direct way to support the community.</p> +            <p>Your donation is very important to \
help maintain the community work. With it we cover costs with servers and contributors meetings, such as \
LaKademy, among other things. Donating is an easy, quick and direct way to support the community.</p>  
             <a href="https://www.kde.org/community/donations/index.php#money" class="more">Donate</a> 
             


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