From kde-commits  Sun Nov 22 23:55:22 2009
From: Andrew Coles <andrew_coles () yahoo ! co ! uk>
Date: Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:55:22 +0000
To: kde-commits
Subject: KDE/kdenetwork/kppp
Message-Id: <1258934122.075227.28782.nullmailer () svn ! kde ! org>
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SVN commit 1053021 by coles:

Proof-reading - revisiting older messages and checking they are consistent with the rest of KDE.



 M  +6 -6      edit.cpp  
 M  +3 -3      kpppwidget.cpp  
 M  +1 -1      modemdb.cpp  


--- trunk/KDE/kdenetwork/kppp/edit.cpp #1053020:1053021
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
 	     "unsure, contact your ISP.\n"
 	     "\n"
 	     "If you can choose between PAP and CHAP,\n"
-	     "choose CHAP, because it's much safer. If you don't know\n"
+	     "choose CHAP, because it is much safer. If you do not know\n"
 	     "whether PAP or CHAP is right, choose PAP/CHAP.");
 
   auth_l->setWhatsThis(tmp);
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@
   staticadd_rb->setWhatsThis(
 		  i18n("Select this option when your computer has a\n"
 		       "fixed internet address (IP). Most computers\n"
-		       "don't have this, so you should probably select\n"
+		       "do not have one, so you should probably select\n"
 		       "dynamic IP addressing unless you know what you\n"
 		       "are doing."));
 
@@ -555,11 +555,11 @@
     KMessageBox::information(this,
 			 i18n("Selecting this option might cause some weird "
 			      "problems with the X-server and applications "
-			      "while kppp is connected. Don't use it until "
-			      "you know what you are doing!\n"
+			      "while kppp is connected. Do not use it unless "
+			      "you know what you are doing.\n"
 			      "For more information take a look at the "
-			      "handbook (or help) in the section \"Frequently "
-			      "asked questions\"."),
+			      "handbook (or help) in the \"Frequently "
+			      "asked questions\" section."),
 			 i18n("Warning"));
     was_warned = true;
   }
--- trunk/KDE/kdenetwork/kppp/kpppwidget.cpp #1053020:1053021
@@ -1060,11 +1060,11 @@
     l1->addLayout(l2);
 
     QLabel *l = new QLabel(i18n("From version 1.4.8 on, kppp has a new feature\n"
-			      "called \"Quickhelp\". It's similar to a tooltip,\n"
+			      "called \"Quickhelp\". It is similar to a tooltip,\n"
 			      "but you can activate it whenever you want.\n"
 			      "\n"
-			      "To activate it, simply click on a control like\n"
-			      "a button or a label with the right mouse button.\n"
+			      "To activate it, simply click on a control (like\n"
+			      "a button or a label) with the right mouse button.\n"
 			      "If the item supports Quickhelp, a popup menu\n"
 			      "will appear leading to Quickhelp.\n"
 			      "\n"
--- trunk/KDE/kdenetwork/kppp/modemdb.cpp #1053020:1053021
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
   tl->setMargin(10);
   QLabel *l1 = new QLabel(i18n("To set up your modem, first choose its vendor in the "
 			       "list to the left, and then select the model from the "
-			       "right list. If you don't know which modem you have, "
+			       "right list. If you do not know which modem you have, "
 			       "you can try out one of the \"Generic\" modems."),
 			this);
   l1->setAlignment(Qt::AlignLeft);