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List:       kde-commits
Subject:    www/sites/discover
From:       Lydia Pintscher <lydia () kde ! org>
Date:       2008-12-07 15:43:33
Message-ID: 1228664613.530892.1181.nullmailer () svn ! kde ! org
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SVN commit 893951 by lydia:

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--- trunk/www/sites/discover/kde.php #893950:893951
@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@
 Once you try KDE, you won't want to look back!
 </p>
 <p>
-KDE offers applications for everyone. Browse the web, chat with your friends, work \
                on documents - you name it, KDE has it. KDE is a great system to 
-<a href="be_productive.php" title="Learn more about using KDE in the office \
space">do office</a>-like activities on, but it also comprises a lot of feature-rich \
and modern applications for <a href="be_entertained.php" title="Learn more about \
using KDE for  +KDE offers applications for everyone. Browse the web, chat with your \
friends, work on documents - you name it, KDE has it. KDE is a great system for  +<a \
href="be_productive.php" title="Learn more about using KDE in the office \
space">office</a>-like activities. It also comprises a lot of feature-rich and modern \
applications for <a href="be_entertained.php" title="Learn more about using KDE for   \
managing and playing multimedia content">multimedia tasks and entertainment</a>, <a \
href="communicate.php" title="Learn more about staying in touch using \
KDE">communication</a> and <a href="learn.php" title="Learn more about KDE for \
educational purposes">education</a>.  </p>
 <p>
-KDE is Free Software developed by a world-wide community. This means for you, the \
user, that KDE software is developed based on the user's needs, not on some company's \
revenue model. KDE does what you want and if it doesn't, the community of \
contributors is always open for your suggestions. +KDE is Free Software developed by \
a world-wide community. This means that KDE software is developed for the needs of \
people like you and not based on some company's revenue model. KDE does what you want \
and if it doesn't, the community of contributors is always open for your suggestions. \
</p>  
 <h1>How would you like your KDE today?</h1>
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
 <h2>Functional</h2>
 
 <p>
-A lot of applications are either distributed with the KDE Desktop or integrate well \
into the technology. KDE's solutions for handling of multimedia, integrating hardware \
into the system and dealing with your data are second to none. This makes KDE the \
most compelling offer for those who value control over their data and for those that \
simply want things to work well. The KDE desktop  +A lot of applications are either \
distributed with the KDE Desktop or integrate well into the technology. KDE's \
solutions for handling of multimedia, integrating hardware into the system and \
dealing with your data are second to none. This makes KDE the most compelling offer \
for those who value control over their data and for those that simply want things to \
work well.<br /> The KDE desktop   comes with a set of applications for file \
                management, image and document 
-viewing, tools to set up the working environment and games. More programs, can be
-installed easily. For nearly every purpose, KDE comes with a handy tool or 
+viewing, tools to set up the working environment and games. More programs can easily \
be +installed. For nearly every purpose, KDE comes with a handy tool or 
 full-fledged application that help you get the job done. Multimedia applications
 for digital image editing, managing your foto collections, playing music and movies,
 KDE has it all. Everything integrates well with each other and thereby create a 
@@ -59,15 +59,15 @@
 <h2>Beautiful</h2>
 <?php screenshot("oxygen-icons_thumb", "The Oxygen icon theme"); ?>
 <p>
-A team of artists has gathered to make KDE not only functional, but also pleasing to
-the eye. The international team of artists have created a consistent, contemporary
+An international team of artists has gathered to make KDE not only functional, but \
also pleasing to +the eye. They have created a consistent, contemporary
 artwork scheme based on the maxim <em>"You eat with your eyes."</em> The Oxygen 
 artwork blends in well with possibilities new PC hardware offers but does not depend \
on it.   KDE is fully usable even on old machines.
 </p>
 <p>
 The Oxygen artwork is used throughout all applications. This way, we ensure you
-a consistant computing experience. 
+a consistent computing experience. 
 </p>
 
 <?php


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