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List:       kde-commits
Subject:    www/sites/discover
From:       Lydia Pintscher <lydia () kde ! org>
Date:       2008-12-07 14:44:52
Message-ID: 1228661092.078931.26726.nullmailer () svn ! kde ! org
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SVN commit 893907 by lydia:

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 M  +3 -6      communicate.php  
 D             entertain.php  
 M  +16 -29    kde.php  
 M  +2 -2      menu.php  
 AM            play.php   entertain.php#893732


--- trunk/www/sites/discover/communicate.php #893906:893907
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 <h1>Communicate with KDE</h1>
 
 
-<h2>View all your documents with KDE4 with Okular</h2>
+<h2>View all your documents with Okular</h2>
 <!--
 [text: okular: document viewer, easy to use, supports lots of formats]
 -->
@@ -37,18 +37,15 @@
 
 <?php
 
-// KDE PIM is not part of 4.0
-/*
-<h2>Read and send emails with</h2>
+<h2>Read and send emails with KMail</h2>
 <?php screenshot("kmail_compose", "Write emails with KMail", $category, "left");?>
 <p>
 With KMail, you have full access to your email. You can send, receive,
-sort, and even search for emails. KMail is fully integrated with other KDE programs. \
 +sort and search for emails. KMail is fully integrated with other KDE programs. 
 For instance, contact information that you save in KMail can be used by 
 instant messaging and calendaring programs.
 </p>
 [screenshot: composing email with KMail]
-*/
 ?>
 
 <h2>Chat with your friends</h2>
--- trunk/www/sites/discover/kde.php #893906:893907
@@ -6,34 +6,28 @@
 include("include/header.php");
 ?>
 
-<h1>KDE 4.0 - Easy to use, functional and beautiful</h1>
+<h1>KDE - Easy to use, functional and beautiful</h1>
 
 <!---<img src="images/get.png" style="float:right;" />-->
 <?php screenshot("desktop.png", "The KDE Desktop with the dolphin filemanager"); ?>
 <p>
-KDE's "Plasma" technology combines beautiful artwork with modern graphical 
-hardware capabilities to provide intuitive ways of interacting with your computer.
+Welcome to a new experience. Enjoy the ease of creation and the power of \
communication. Have fun, play and learn new things. +<br />
+KDE provides you with simple, intuitive ways of interaction with your computer. Its \
Plasma technology combines beautiful artwork with modern graphical effects and visual \
hints. This helps you focus on your tasks in a natural and easy way. +<br />
  Graphical effects are used throughout the desktop to provide visual hints to 
 the human brain that make for easier orientation in the 'world of your computer', 
 and that help you focus on your task. The KDE desktop supports your current way 
 of interacting with the computer and at the same time offers new technologies.<br />
-Once you try KDE, you won't want to go back!
+Once you try KDE, you won't want to look back!
 </p>
 <p>
-KDE has applications for nearly everyone. Browse the web, chat with your friends,
-work on documents -- you name it, KDE has it. KDE is the great system to 
-<a href="be_productive.php" title="Learn more about using KDE in the office \
                space">do
-office</a>-like activities on, but it also comprises a lot of feature-rich and \
                modern
-applications for <a href="be_entertained.php" title="Learn more about using KDE for 
-managing and playing multimedia content">multimedia tasks and entertainment</a>, 
-<a href="communicate.php" title="Learn more about staying in touch using \
                KDE">communication</a> 
-and <a href="learn.php" title="Learn more about KDE for educational \
purposes">education</a>. +KDE has applications for everyone. Browse the web, chat \
with your friends, work on documents -- you name it, KDE has it. KDE is a great \
system to  +<a href="be_productive.php" title="Learn more about using KDE in the \
office space">do office</a>-like activities on, but it also comprises a lot of \
feature-rich and modern applications for <a href="be_entertained.php" title="Learn \
more about using KDE for  +managing and playing multimedia content">multimedia tasks \
and entertainment</a>, <a href="communicate.php" title="Learn more about staying in \
touch using KDE">communication</a> and <a href="learn.php" title="Learn more about \
KDE for educational purposes">education</a>.  </p>
 <p>
-KDE is Free Software developed by a world-wide community. This means for you, the \
                user, that 
-KDE software is developed based on the user's needs, not on some company's revenue \
                model. KDE 
-does what you want -- and if it doesn't, the community of contributors is always \
                open for 
-your suggestions.
+KDE is Free Software developed by a world-wide community. This means for you, the \
user, that KDE software is developed based on the user's needs, not on some company's \
revenue model. KDE does what you want and if it doesn't, the community of \
contributors is always open for your suggestions.  </p>
 
 <h1>How would you like your KDE today?</h1>
@@ -47,25 +41,18 @@
 [text: blurb about usability]
 <p>
 KDE has been designed from the ground up with usability in mind. A 
-<a href="http://www.openusability.org">team</a> of dedicated usability 
-experts has contributed its expertise 
-to streamline and structure the user interfaces to make KDE usable for
-everyone. KDE works for you rather than against you.
+<a href="http://www.openusability.org">team</a> of dedicated usability experts has \
contributed its expertise to streamline and structure the user interfaces to make KDE \
usable for everyone. KDE works for you rather than against you.  </p>
 
 <h2>Functional</h2>
 
 <p>
-A lot of applications are either distributed with the KDE Desktop or
-integrate well into the technology. KDE's solutions for handling of multimedia, 
-integrating hardware into the system and dealing with your data are second to none. 
-This makes KDE the most compelling offer for those who value control over 
-their data and for those that simply want things to work well. The KDE dekstop 
-comes with a basic set of applications for file management, image and document 
+A lot of applications are either distributed with the KDE Desktop or integrate well \
into the technology. KDE's solutions for handling of multimedia, integrating hardware \
into the system and dealing with your data are second to none. This makes KDE the \
most compelling offer for those who value control over their data and for those that \
simply want things to work well. The KDE desktop  +comes with a set of applications \
for file management, image and document   viewing, tools to set up the working \
environment and games. More programs, can be  installed easily. For nearly every \
                purpose, KDE comes with a handy tool or 
-full-fledged application that help you getting the job done. Multimedia applications
-for digital image editing, managing your fotocollections, playing music and movies,
+full-fledged application that help you get the job done. Multimedia applications
+for digital image editing, managing your foto collections, playing music and movies,
 KDE has it all. Everything integrates well with each other and thereby create a 
 complete, consistent and easy to use environment that is a pleasure to work with.
 </p>
@@ -76,7 +63,7 @@
 <p>
 A team of artists has gathered to make KDE not only functional, but also pleasing to
 the eye. The international team of artists have created a consistent, contemporary
-artwork scheme based on the maxim  <em>"You eat with your eyes."</em> The Oxygen 
+artwork scheme based on the maxim <em>"You eat with your eyes."</em> The Oxygen 
 artwork blends in well with possibilities new PC hardware offers but does not depend \
on it.   KDE is fully usable even on old machines.
 </p>
--- trunk/www/sites/discover/menu.php #893906:893907
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
 
 menuItem("Meet", "kde.php", "kde");
 menuItem("Communicate", "communicate.php", "communicate");
-menuItem("Entertain", "entertain.php", "entertain");
-menuItem("Educate", "learn.php", "educate");
+menuItem("Entertain", "play.php", "play");
+menuItem("Educate", "learn.php", "learn");
 menuItem("Create", "create.php", "create");
 menuItem("Get KDE", "get.php", "kde");
 
** trunk/www/sites/discover/play.php #property svn:mergeinfo
   + 


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