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List:       kde-accessibility
Subject:    Re: [Kde-accessibility] Dot article draft
From:       Olaf Jan Schmidt <olaf () amen-online ! de>
Date:       2002-11-27 13:26:59
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[Philippe FREMY]
> I suggest to put the IRC meeting report in one page only. Dividing by
> chapter makes sense when each chapter is made of several long
> paragraph. It is better to have it in one page because poeple can read
> it at once. Remember, internet connection is still slow.

Is it possible to have dokbook produce but one page? Then we should do 
that.

> a great number of people ? I would just say "more people have..."

OK. I did not find these words, thanks.

> I would replace "An even bigger project" by "the challenge is now to
> ..."

Great formulation.

> You forgot the call for help at the end and a short description of what
> accessbility is in the introduction.
> Except that, I find the article very good.

Sure. Tnaks for your good suggestions

Olaf.

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Olaf Jan Schmidt, KDE Accessibility team

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