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Subject:    [Ipcop-svn] SF.net SVN: ipcop:[3890] IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin
From:       eoberlander () users ! sourceforge ! net
Date:       2009-11-29 14:49:27
Message-ID: E1NEl5a-0004ju-W3 () d5vjzd1 ! ch3 ! sourceforge ! com
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Revision: 3890
          http://ipcop.svn.sourceforge.net/ipcop/?rev=3890&view=rev
Author:   eoberlander
Date:     2009-11-29 14:49:25 +0000 (Sun, 29 Nov 2009)

Log Message:
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Edit out server, and some other tweaks.

Modified Paths:
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    IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/images/vpn-auth2.png
    IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/system.xml

Modified: IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/images/vpn-auth2.png
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Modified: IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/system.xml
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--- IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/system.xml	2009-11-29 14:34:20 UTC (rev 3889)
+++ IPCopDoc/trunk/en/admin/xml/system.xml	2009-11-29 14:49:25 UTC (rev 3890)
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <title>System Web Pages</title>
     <para>
         This group of web pages is designed to help you administer and
-        control the IPCop server itself.
+        control IPCop itself.
         To get to these web pages, select
         <guimenu>System</guimenu> from the tab bar at the top of the screen.
         The following choices will appear in a dropdown:
@@ -287,8 +287,8 @@
             <para>
                 Only IPCop official patches (which have been 
                 <command>gpg</command> signed) will actually install on your 
-                IPCop server.
-                Some updates may require you to reboot your IPCop server,
+                IPCop.
+                Some updates may require you to reboot your IPCop,
                 so please read <emphasis role="strong">all</emphasis>
                 patch information thoroughly before applying the update.
             </para>
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@
             <title>Troubleshooting</title>
             <para>
                 If you get an error message <quote>This is not an authorised 
-                update</quote>, check if your IPCop server&apos;s clock is in
+                update</quote>, check if your IPCop&apos;s clock is in
                 the past, as <command>gpg</command> will think the signature 
                 date is in the future, and will stop with an error.
             </para>   
@@ -316,6 +316,10 @@
     <sect2 id="system-passwords">
         <title>Passwords</title>
         <para>
+            This page allows you to change the 
+            &apos;admin&apos; and/or &apos;dial&apos; User passwords.
+        </para>
+        <para>
         <figure id="v2.system.004" >
                 <title>Passwords screen</title>
             <mediaobject>
@@ -333,10 +337,7 @@
         </figure>
         </para>
         <para>
-            The <guilabel>Passwords</guilabel> page allows you to change the 
-            &apos;admin&apos; and/or &apos;dial&apos; User passwords, 
-            as you deem necessary.
-            Simply enter the desired password once in each field for the User 
+            Enter the desired password once in each field for the User 
             you wish to update and click the <guibutton>Save</guibutton> button. 
         </para>
         <para>
@@ -715,14 +716,15 @@
                 opening a session with the right machine.
                 The first time a session is opened, one of the fingerprints will be \
displayed  by SSH and you will be asked to verify it&apos;s correct.
-                If you wish, you can verify it by looking at this web page.
+                If you wish, you can verify it by looking at this ggg.
             </para>
         </sect3>
     </sect2>
     <sect2 id="system-gui-settings">
         <title>GUI Settings</title>
         <para>
-            This web page governs how the IPCop web pages function and appear.
+            This page controls the appearance and functionality of 
+            IPCop&apos;s web pages. 
         </para>
         <para>
             After making any changes, remember to press the \
<guibutton>Save</guibutton> button. @@ -846,7 +848,7 @@
     <sect2 id="system-backup">
         <title>Backup Web Page</title>
         <para>
-            This web page allows you to backup your system&apos;s settings, 
+            This page allows you to backup your system&apos;s settings, 
             either to a floppy disk (if you have one installed), or to a file.
             The files can be saved to the harddrive, or to a USB stick, and
             exported and restored via this page.


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