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Subject:    [TLS] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-dtls13-41: (with COMMENT)
From:       Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply () ietf ! org>
Date:       2021-03-25 13:08:35
Message-ID: 161667771572.31058.7580704722311028874 () ietfa ! amsl ! com
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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-dtls13-41: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 5.8.2, paragraph 1, comment:
> 5.8.2.  Timer Values

I agree with Martin Duke's DISCUSS position (also on 5.8.3).

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All comments below are very minor change suggestions that you may choose to
incorporate in some way (or ignore), as you see fit. There is no need to let me
know what you did with these suggestions.

"Abstract", paragraph 1, nit:
> Abstract

The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC6347, but the
abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

Section 15.1, paragraph 12, nit:
>    [RFC8446]  Rescorla, E., "The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol
>               Version 1.3", RFC 8446, DOI 10.17487/RFC8446, August 2018,
>               <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8446>.
>
>    [TLS13]    Rescorla, E., "The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol
>               Version 1.3", RFC 8446, DOI 10.17487/RFC8446, August 2018,
>               <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8446>.

These are the same.

Section 15.2, paragraph 4, nit:
>    [DEPRECATE]
>               Moriarty, K. and S. Farrell, "Deprecating TLSv1.0 and
>               TLSv1.1", Work in Progress, Internet-Draft, draft-ietf-
>               tls-oldversions-deprecate-12, 21 January 2021,
>               <http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-tls-
>               oldversions-deprecate-12.txt>.

Outdated reference: draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate has been published as
RFC 8996

Section 4.2.1, paragraph 2, nit:
-    packet loss causes noticeable problems implementations MAY choose to
+    packet loss causes noticeable problems, implementations MAY choose to
+                                          +

Section 5.7, paragraph 2, nit:
-    contains a complete list of message combinations that consitute
+    contains a complete list of message combinations that constitute
+                                                              +



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