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List:       ietf-tls
Subject:    [TLS] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-tls-dtls13-41: (with COMMENT)
From:       Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply () ietf ! org>
Date:       2021-03-23 19:03:46
Message-ID: 161652622642.22774.1032643829915449759 () ietfa ! amsl ! com
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-dtls13-41: Yes

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COMMENT:
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[ section 4.4 ]

* "respectively" -> "respectively."

* Could a DTLS implementation packetize to a min-MTU for an IP version
  and avoid all pMTU issues?  Such a strategy would probably be poor for
  IPv4 but might be acceptable for IPv6 communications.

[ section 4.5.3 ]

* "MUST NOT used" -> "MUST NOT be used"

[ section 5.8.4 ]

* "NOT have send" -> "NOT send", I think

[ section 6 ]

* "which are needed to encrypt to decrypt"?



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