'[TLS] Editorial suggestion for tls-subcert document'

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List:       ietf-tls
Subject:    [TLS] Editorial suggestion for tls-subcert document
From:       "Salz, Rich" <rsalz=40akamai.com () dmarc ! ietf ! org>
Date:       2020-08-27 15:22:00
Message-ID: 9F6E4263-5009-45B9-8E9D-CE746E89AB59 () akamai ! com
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I didn't make a PR because I wasn't sure of the exact wording we need.

The explanation of credential has this text:

   valid_time:  Time in seconds relative to the beginning of the
      delegation certificate's notBefore value after which the delegated
      credential is no longer valid.  This MUST NOT exceed 7 days.

I think adding ", when evaluated against the current time" will really help.

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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">I didn't make a PR because I \
wasn't sure of the exact wording we need.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p \
class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p> <p \
class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The explanation of credential has \
this text:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp; valid_time:&nbsp; Time in seconds relative to \
the beginning of the<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; delegation certificate's \
notBefore value after which the delegated<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p \
class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; \
credential is no longer valid.&nbsp; This MUST NOT exceed 7 \
days.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt">I think adding ", when evaluated against the current time" \
will really help.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span \
style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p> </div>
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