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Subject:    Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01
From:       Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3 () gmail ! com>
Date:       2014-04-29 15:28:00
Message-ID: CAF4+nEEq2LmPm37i-TWTTwGQYgNTRf-JJjo+_34K4Mrd_nCxtQ () mail ! gmail ! com
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Hi Peter,

I'm fine with all of your suggestion. Thanks for the review.

Donald
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On Fri, Apr 25, 2014 at 1:30 AM, Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
> may receive.
>
> Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: April-24-2014
> IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014
> IESG Telechat date: TBD
>
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current
> Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready
> with nits.]
>
> This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering
> the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the
> IETF.
>
> Nits:
>
> Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage
> found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011.
>
> General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity".
>
> General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points".
>
> General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode".
>
> Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA
> Considerations".
>
> Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period.
>
> Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to
> match http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt.  Hey, I'm running out
> of nits to pick here. :-)
>
>                 -Peter Yee
>
>

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